This is not about today's tragic events. I could write on that, but not yet. I think I need more time to emotionally process what happened.
I had a minor surgery today. Everything went fine according to the doctor. I expect pain and discomfort to come on soon (anesthetic will wear off).
The good news is out that I am off my feet and ordered absolute minimum activity. For the first time in weeks I really can just stay in one place and write. Everything has been so busy and hectic these past weeks that I couldn't focus to write. I'm relieved despite the pain.
So I'll go relax, push pain out of mind, and let the story flow in my mind, and travel to my fingertips.
Friday, December 14, 2012
Monday, November 12, 2012
Work In Progress Interview
I was tagged by Clover Autrey to do these interview questions, and then to tag some authors following that.
Ten Interview Questions:
What is your working title of your book?
Island Of Regrets
Where did the idea come from for the book?
It came from noticing that sometimes after a bad end to a relationship - the two separate and don't make amends. I wanted to explore how that could be different.
What genre does your book fall under?
Romance - but I don't think it fits typical Romance (such as Harlequin) story. I'll get some feedback from some friends who are true Romance writers and readers.
Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
This is pretty easy, I only have 2 people in the book. I would have Matthew McConaughey play the male lead. I could see Ginnifer Goodwin for the female lead, but she would need to work on not having a Southern accent (and it wouldn't hurt if she could speak French)
What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?
If you didn't have the choice to make amends with someone from your past, could you?
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
Right now it will most likely be self published. If I get a representative before it comes out, that changes things a bit.
How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?
I am still working on it.
What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?
I honestly don't know.
Who or what inspired you to write this book?
My personal need to chase my own ghosts inside my head.
What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
This story is about two people who had a relationship that ended badly. They find themselves stranded on an island and they are the only two people there. They have to survive, and they have to face their pasts. This book represents the most emotion I have ever attempted to write. I won't let it go to publishing until I feel satisfied I have achieved the emotional goals I want in the story.
Links to Authors participating in the WIP interview.
Jesse Kimmel Freeman
Ten Interview Questions:
What is your working title of your book?
Island Of Regrets
Where did the idea come from for the book?
It came from noticing that sometimes after a bad end to a relationship - the two separate and don't make amends. I wanted to explore how that could be different.
What genre does your book fall under?
Romance - but I don't think it fits typical Romance (such as Harlequin) story. I'll get some feedback from some friends who are true Romance writers and readers.
Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
This is pretty easy, I only have 2 people in the book. I would have Matthew McConaughey play the male lead. I could see Ginnifer Goodwin for the female lead, but she would need to work on not having a Southern accent (and it wouldn't hurt if she could speak French)
What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?
If you didn't have the choice to make amends with someone from your past, could you?
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
Right now it will most likely be self published. If I get a representative before it comes out, that changes things a bit.
How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?
I am still working on it.
What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?
I honestly don't know.
Who or what inspired you to write this book?
My personal need to chase my own ghosts inside my head.
What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
This story is about two people who had a relationship that ended badly. They find themselves stranded on an island and they are the only two people there. They have to survive, and they have to face their pasts. This book represents the most emotion I have ever attempted to write. I won't let it go to publishing until I feel satisfied I have achieved the emotional goals I want in the story.
Links to Authors participating in the WIP interview.
Jesse Kimmel Freeman
Tuesday, November 6, 2012
Out in The Woods

That is a quick pick of my Truck after it went out hunting with me. As you can see, it is not on a road, but is out in the woods. It would have been a good time to do some writing, except that the location I was hunting in gets tons of rain. I wasn't about to risk my computer and precious files just to get in one or two chapters.
So I am back home, and I am in good spirits and ready for some writing.
Monday, October 29, 2012
In The Details
Several years ago I read a book that contained a story line about a couple trees. It was a very detailed story and I am going to paraphrase it. If you recognize it, please don't place anything in comments to reveal what book it is from. I have a lot of respect for the author who wrote it, this just happened to be one instance of something that didn't work for me.
The tree story goes something like this. They were very large old trees that grew in the Pacific Northwest of the U.S. Some businessmen from the far east bought those trees because they wanted to restore an one of the ancient temples in their country.
The trees were harvested, and the left out in the weather for months. There was lots of rain and the trees got wet pretty much every day. They were very water logged by the time they were transported to a shipyard to be loaded onto a ship for transport to the Far East.
The trees were chained to the deck of the ship and away they went. Along the way they encountered very fierce storms. The already water logged trees were further drenched from torrential rains and waves that sent spray over the deck of the ship.
Eventually it was too much for the chains, which gave out and the trees went overboard. They were so water logged that they actually sunk several feet below the surface before their natural buoyancy halted the descent.
Those trees floated there several feet below the surface of the ocean before the real purpose and reason for them being in the story was revealed.
There were chapters devoted to those trees. Extraordinary details which described how those trees ended up floating under the surface of the ocean, all so they could impact the lives of the characters who encountered those trees below the surface.
For me, it was way too much detail. I do recognize there had to be an explanation for how these huge logs ended up floating below the surface of the ocean, but to give so many details made it excruciating to read.
I try to watch the details I am including. To remember what I wrote. It's not an easy task at all. I've gone back to read things I have written and had to ask myself why I added something I had added. I will press on. The stories can't be told unless I face the fact that I might not write perfectly. I just make sure I give my very best.
The tree story goes something like this. They were very large old trees that grew in the Pacific Northwest of the U.S. Some businessmen from the far east bought those trees because they wanted to restore an one of the ancient temples in their country.
The trees were harvested, and the left out in the weather for months. There was lots of rain and the trees got wet pretty much every day. They were very water logged by the time they were transported to a shipyard to be loaded onto a ship for transport to the Far East.
The trees were chained to the deck of the ship and away they went. Along the way they encountered very fierce storms. The already water logged trees were further drenched from torrential rains and waves that sent spray over the deck of the ship.
Eventually it was too much for the chains, which gave out and the trees went overboard. They were so water logged that they actually sunk several feet below the surface before their natural buoyancy halted the descent.
Those trees floated there several feet below the surface of the ocean before the real purpose and reason for them being in the story was revealed.
There were chapters devoted to those trees. Extraordinary details which described how those trees ended up floating under the surface of the ocean, all so they could impact the lives of the characters who encountered those trees below the surface.
For me, it was way too much detail. I do recognize there had to be an explanation for how these huge logs ended up floating below the surface of the ocean, but to give so many details made it excruciating to read.
I try to watch the details I am including. To remember what I wrote. It's not an easy task at all. I've gone back to read things I have written and had to ask myself why I added something I had added. I will press on. The stories can't be told unless I face the fact that I might not write perfectly. I just make sure I give my very best.
Thursday, October 25, 2012
It's a Small World
Last summer I took a College Algebra course at the local junior college. It was a fairly difficult course, but I did manage to get an A- for my final grade.
Almost every class I brought in a copy of Jeremy's Kiss and put it on my desk so everyone around me could see it. I didn't say anything, just put it there to let it advertise itself.
I was successful. The instructor purchased the signed copy in the last day of class.
Today I heard that he got to talking to one of his current students about books, and they have both read Jeremy's Kiss.
Well talk about a small world. I'm a happy author.
Almost every class I brought in a copy of Jeremy's Kiss and put it on my desk so everyone around me could see it. I didn't say anything, just put it there to let it advertise itself.
I was successful. The instructor purchased the signed copy in the last day of class.
Today I heard that he got to talking to one of his current students about books, and they have both read Jeremy's Kiss.
Well talk about a small world. I'm a happy author.
Monday, October 22, 2012
From 300,000 to 1.2 Million
Just got some exciting news today.
First of all, the 300,000 is about the review I got in the Lubbock Avalanche Journal for Jeremy's Kiss.
http://lubbockonline.com/entertainment/2012-09-01/kerns-thrills-chills-abound-thompsons-self-published-jeremys-kiss?v=#
The Lubbock area encompasses about 300,000 people. I am definitely not complaining about that reach. It was awesome.
Today though, I got the news that Jeremy's Kiss will be featured in this Sunday's Omaha World Herald. I don't know if it is a book review or if it is a press release. I just know the book will be in that paper.
I am spreading the word to the very best of my ability. I am going to buy copies of that newspaper too. I am starting my own scrapbook of newspaper mentions. Talk about super exciting.
First of all, the 300,000 is about the review I got in the Lubbock Avalanche Journal for Jeremy's Kiss.
http://lubbockonline.com/entertainment/2012-09-01/kerns-thrills-chills-abound-thompsons-self-published-jeremys-kiss?v=#
The Lubbock area encompasses about 300,000 people. I am definitely not complaining about that reach. It was awesome.
Today though, I got the news that Jeremy's Kiss will be featured in this Sunday's Omaha World Herald. I don't know if it is a book review or if it is a press release. I just know the book will be in that paper.
I am spreading the word to the very best of my ability. I am going to buy copies of that newspaper too. I am starting my own scrapbook of newspaper mentions. Talk about super exciting.
Tuesday, October 16, 2012
The Scorpion And The Swan
One day a scorpion arrived at a river. She wanted to cross but knew she wouldn't be able to swim against the current. She looked over and saw a beautiful swan swimming along the other shore.
She called out to the swan and asked if he would carry her on his back to the other side. The swan was uncertain because the scorpion was known to be dangerous.
The scorpion asked again, with a promise to not harm the swan. And even pointed out that if she stung the swan, then she would die in the current.
The swan figured there was no risk. After all, why would the scorpion sting a creature that was helping it?
So he swam over and allowed the scorpion to climb onto his back. About half-way across the river, the scorpion stung the swan and as they were being swept away by the current the swan asked: "Why did you sting me?"
The scorpion responded: "It is my nature. It's what I do."
I know what it is like to encounter the scorpion. A person who even if you try to help them, will still sting you and bring you down.
She called out to the swan and asked if he would carry her on his back to the other side. The swan was uncertain because the scorpion was known to be dangerous.
The scorpion asked again, with a promise to not harm the swan. And even pointed out that if she stung the swan, then she would die in the current.
The swan figured there was no risk. After all, why would the scorpion sting a creature that was helping it?
So he swam over and allowed the scorpion to climb onto his back. About half-way across the river, the scorpion stung the swan and as they were being swept away by the current the swan asked: "Why did you sting me?"
The scorpion responded: "It is my nature. It's what I do."
I know what it is like to encounter the scorpion. A person who even if you try to help them, will still sting you and bring you down.
Sunday, October 14, 2012
My Happy Truck
I have a happy pickup truck.
It is a 4X4 truck with a big V8 engine. One look at it and you can tell it is a truck that is made for getting off road and playing in the great outdoors.
Well I like getting into the great outdoors, so it's a good relationship.
I just got back from a hunting trip. The truck got to show off it's muscles and tow an RV trailer (along with 3 adults and 2 grown teens), plus all the camping and hunting gear.
We went out on muddy back roads. We went off the road (only a little bit), and got to climb over some big bumps covered with mud.
The hunting part was not successful. The camping part, well, there was no one anywhere around us and that was absolutely amazing for me, I like it when I go camping and I really get away from it all.
And of course, my truck is really happy because it got a full weekend of being a real truck and getting to do the things it was made to do.
It is a 4X4 truck with a big V8 engine. One look at it and you can tell it is a truck that is made for getting off road and playing in the great outdoors.
Well I like getting into the great outdoors, so it's a good relationship.
I just got back from a hunting trip. The truck got to show off it's muscles and tow an RV trailer (along with 3 adults and 2 grown teens), plus all the camping and hunting gear.
We went out on muddy back roads. We went off the road (only a little bit), and got to climb over some big bumps covered with mud.
The hunting part was not successful. The camping part, well, there was no one anywhere around us and that was absolutely amazing for me, I like it when I go camping and I really get away from it all.
And of course, my truck is really happy because it got a full weekend of being a real truck and getting to do the things it was made to do.
Thursday, October 11, 2012
Schedule Part 2
We decided on a schedule and here it is.
I'll write on Tuesdays, Wednesdays, and Sundays.
Time permitting I will work on promoting on Saturdays.
The rest of the week belongs to family and friends and taking care of my house (oh, and that pesky day job).
I'll write on Tuesdays, Wednesdays, and Sundays.
Time permitting I will work on promoting on Saturdays.
The rest of the week belongs to family and friends and taking care of my house (oh, and that pesky day job).
Tuesday, October 9, 2012
Schedule
I realized today that I need to be on a schedule.
I have a work schedule.
I have a schedule for when I go for violin lessons.
When I was in school, I had a class schedule.
I kept to those schedules to the best of my ability. I went to class, I go to violin lessons. I get to work on time and stay until clock out time (or later).
I don't have a writing schedule though. Everyone pretty much assumes when I am home I am free to do whatever, and so time gets filled with stuff that is not writing.
I am going to set a schedule. Otherwise I will not be able to accomplish my goals. I might even publicly post that schedule. Who knows. I just know that I am going to set that schedule, and I treat it like a work or class schedule that I am obligated to be at.
I have a work schedule.
I have a schedule for when I go for violin lessons.
When I was in school, I had a class schedule.
I kept to those schedules to the best of my ability. I went to class, I go to violin lessons. I get to work on time and stay until clock out time (or later).
I don't have a writing schedule though. Everyone pretty much assumes when I am home I am free to do whatever, and so time gets filled with stuff that is not writing.
I am going to set a schedule. Otherwise I will not be able to accomplish my goals. I might even publicly post that schedule. Who knows. I just know that I am going to set that schedule, and I treat it like a work or class schedule that I am obligated to be at.
Friday, October 5, 2012
The Long Work Week
I haven't been quiet on purpose. Really. It was just a really long work week in which I put in several hours of overtime. Every single day was a bust my butt and do everything I could do to get caught back up.
I came home from the day job every day time job just plain exhausted. That is no condition in which to try and write.
I am happy to say that I have survived the week. I am going to catch up on email. Maybe write some, but no promises because I am still very tired. I will get some rest and get back to writing. I got a story that needs to be told.'
PS - On further review of this post. I see why I haven't been writing this week, and why I really should consider not writing anymore tonight.
I came home from the day job every day time job just plain exhausted. That is no condition in which to try and write.
I am happy to say that I have survived the week. I am going to catch up on email. Maybe write some, but no promises because I am still very tired. I will get some rest and get back to writing. I got a story that needs to be told.'
PS - On further review of this post. I see why I haven't been writing this week, and why I really should consider not writing anymore tonight.
Monday, October 1, 2012
"Jeremy's Kiss" Reviewed in Lubbock Avalanche Journal

For those who don't know, the Lubbock Avalanche Journal is the main city newspaper in Lubbock, TX.
This is what unknown, struggling, self published author's call a really awesome break. Newspapers generally don't do press releases on unknown self published authors. In fact, William Kern's (Entertainment Editor at Lubbock Avalanche Journal) told me exactly that, but he was willing to give me a chance and asked if I would send him a copy of the book.
I sent it. He read it, and he was impressed enough to interview me and put the full review in the Sunday edition on Sept 2, 2012. I would love to put the full text of the review right here in this blog, but it was actually pretty long.
So here is a link to the book review posted online by the Lubbock Avalanche Journal.
Thrills, chills abound in Thompson's Thriller Jeremy's Kiss
Sunday, September 30, 2012
Some Jeremy's Kiss History
Jeremy's Kiss started in the mid 1990s as an idea. I had my group of friends that I hung out with and we did all kinds of games and spending time together. One of the games we played was to create vampire characters, create a storyline, and through the course of an evening (or several) each would share what our characters did as the situations developed.
I created one of the story lines, but we never got the opportunity to play it out.
So the idea sat in my head.
In the early 2000s, I sat down and started typing out a short story about a runaway girl. It was just something that came to my mind, and I just let it out. I realized as that short story developed that it would go very well with the idea I had generated as a game with my friends.
I followed that thought, and it clicked. It really worked. I had more than a story line. I had the makings of a book. That was when I had to write. It needed to move out of my head and into a file.
I wrote for about a year. Then I spent another year just going over and going over what I had written. I wanted it to be something I would want to read.
Then came the really hard part. Finding someone to edit the story for me. That didn't happen while it sat on my computer. Then I heard about self publishing. I didn't think of myself as an author at that time. I just knew I had written a book and that was something kind of cool. So I went to Create Space and got it started, but I didn't "release" it for sale. I ordered the proof copy and went back to trying to find an editor. In the meantime I worked on it myself. I grabbed the red pen, and went through the print edition and found all kinds of corrections I needed to make. Then I found an editor (call her Teri). She read through it all, and added her corrections.
I poured over it making all those corrections. Then in April of this year I officially released it for sale. I didn't expect much. I was happy with what I had done. Then the first reviews come in. Wow. I was really struck. I couldn't believe what I was hearing. People who read the story really liked it.
One of them did some freelance editing, and she sent me another page of corrections to make. I went back through and made the corrections. Then put it back up for sale.
That is where it is today. I still hear amazing reviews from people who read it.
There is the story of how Jeremy's Kiss came to be.
I created one of the story lines, but we never got the opportunity to play it out.
So the idea sat in my head.
In the early 2000s, I sat down and started typing out a short story about a runaway girl. It was just something that came to my mind, and I just let it out. I realized as that short story developed that it would go very well with the idea I had generated as a game with my friends.
I followed that thought, and it clicked. It really worked. I had more than a story line. I had the makings of a book. That was when I had to write. It needed to move out of my head and into a file.
I wrote for about a year. Then I spent another year just going over and going over what I had written. I wanted it to be something I would want to read.
Then came the really hard part. Finding someone to edit the story for me. That didn't happen while it sat on my computer. Then I heard about self publishing. I didn't think of myself as an author at that time. I just knew I had written a book and that was something kind of cool. So I went to Create Space and got it started, but I didn't "release" it for sale. I ordered the proof copy and went back to trying to find an editor. In the meantime I worked on it myself. I grabbed the red pen, and went through the print edition and found all kinds of corrections I needed to make. Then I found an editor (call her Teri). She read through it all, and added her corrections.
I poured over it making all those corrections. Then in April of this year I officially released it for sale. I didn't expect much. I was happy with what I had done. Then the first reviews come in. Wow. I was really struck. I couldn't believe what I was hearing. People who read the story really liked it.
One of them did some freelance editing, and she sent me another page of corrections to make. I went back through and made the corrections. Then put it back up for sale.
That is where it is today. I still hear amazing reviews from people who read it.
There is the story of how Jeremy's Kiss came to be.
Saturday, September 29, 2012
This Blog is open for Business
This is still a work in progress.
But I can now safely say the blog is open and visitors are always welcome of course.
I wish I had more to say with my first post, but after putting in a few hours just on the look of the page, I seem to be short of words.
For any who visit at this time. Welcome, and I'll be sure to work on having some better quality to the posting (I have a head full of stuff to write, I'll get there).
Happy Saturday.
But I can now safely say the blog is open and visitors are always welcome of course.
I wish I had more to say with my first post, but after putting in a few hours just on the look of the page, I seem to be short of words.
For any who visit at this time. Welcome, and I'll be sure to work on having some better quality to the posting (I have a head full of stuff to write, I'll get there).
Happy Saturday.
Friday, September 28, 2012
Under Construction
Exactly what it says. This site is under construction. Right now it's a generic site built from generic materials.
Please feel welcome, and know that I am working to make this a great site to visit. So come back and check the updates.
Please feel welcome, and know that I am working to make this a great site to visit. So come back and check the updates.
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