I did a little experiment today with Jeremy's Kiss. When I first released the book I had the pitch on the back cover. Later I changed the pitch and entered the book in a contest (sadly the pitch wasn't good enough to get into the next round of the contest).
I was not able to tell which pitch was actually better though.
So I asked a friend who has a daughter who knows nothing about me at all (they live across the country) to read both pitches as if they were 2 different books and tell me whether or not she would be interested in reading the book. Then which book she would prefer.
So my non-scientific experiment with an unbiased person indicated that I should be using the newer pitch. I think I'll keep it.
Always go with your first impression. After all, you did write the book. Good to hear from you. See you have been busy. Give a shout every now and then. How many books do you have right now? You need some help promoting it in various networks and my website?
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Thank you Mardi. As always...It's exciting to be creating these stories.
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